All:
Thank you very much for the opportunity to provide feedback. I agree with Yasmeen's suggestion that some of the bullet points could be condensed or removed. Also, to build on her point about copy-editing, has someone gone through the links to confirm they all still work, and if they lead to an article, that the article is freely available in full-text? As a related issue (and I know it is late in the process), do we need additional recent works as citations, even if the older ones still have value and relevance? Finally, do we have a visual timeline of the changes to the Framework that we could include?
Thank you, again.
Eric Edwards
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Eric Edwards
Interlibrary Loan Librarian
Illinois State Library
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Original Message:
Sent: Aug 07, 2026 10:08 AM
From: Yasmeen Shorish
Subject: Pre-vote discussion: Revised Framework for Information Literacy for Higher Education
Hi all - I don't have much substantive feedback on the content (I gave it during the open comment period). I do think some copy editing would be helpful and I think we should have fewer disposition bullets - particularly for the last frame. It seems a bit overwhelming.
I do appreciate the appendix but wonder if we could beef up the section on disciplinary faculty engagement? This is an area that I know my own institution is always working towards and more authoritative documentation from ACRL that could be shared with faculty will help support positioning our expertise and relevance across campus.
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Yasmeen Shorish
Associate Dean for Research & Scholarly Communications
James Madison University
She/Her/Hers
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