A few comments from the various groups that the ODLOS AC represents (These comments do not represent all of the groups as a whole and were not edited -- they are from individuals within the larger membership):
To point 1 on the Equity, Diversity, and Inclusion bill: I. Books and other library resources should be provided for the interest, information, and enlightenment of all people of the community the library serves.
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Currently the way this section reads I think someone could demand white supremacist books be included. There should be a line added to the effect of, "books and materials that do not promote hateful beliefs or activities." Really, all the points in this bill could use language like that.
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I would amend one sentence:
When we recognize, value, and embrace diversity, we are [recognizing, valuing, and embracing] [change to: engaging with and seeking to understand] the uniqueness of each individual.
Changing the object of the sentence doesn't necessarily clarify its understanding. The predicate, as was, didn't communicate much in my opinion. Additionally, I don't believe embracing diversity is the same as embracing individual differences. That is, I don't have to agree with you (which is how "embrace" reads to me--I know that might be a point of contention, but I'm sure I'm not the only one) to engage peacefully with you. But if I (or someone) does embrace diversity, I definitely should engage with you in a civil way.
My thoughts on this are partially informed by this essay: http://pluralism.org/encounter/todays-challenges/from-diversity-to-pluralism/
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Regarding the EDI Interpretation, I'd like to add that diversity also includes diversity of thought, perspective, and personal experiences of each individual, and how this strengthens (rather than derails) a library organization's objectives and goals, and the diversity of the communities they serve.